Chapter 117 Use this report
Chapter 117 Use this report
Damn bastard!
You are targeting me!
Yang Jinbao walked out of the office angrily with fire in his eyes and came to Qin Hailong's office.
"Director, my manuscript was returned by Director Zhao. He insisted on using Lu An's own report." Yang Jinbao said directly.
Qin Hailong was not surprised at this situation. After all, Lu An was the person Ye Xianggao specifically asked Zhao Yuedong to take care of. If he couldn't even handle a report, and let a rookie like Yang Jinbao steal the limelight in front of him, that would be weird.
Of course Zhao Yuedong also had his reasons. It was reasonable for Yang Jinbao, a rookie in official documents, to reject the application.
"Comrade Jin Bao, don't worry. After all, this is Lu An's own achievement. We should take care of his emotions. It is only natural for him to make the report."
Qin Hailong changed the subject at the end: "Have you read Lu An's report? Tell me what you think."
"No shit!"
Yang Jinbao blurted out, and then explained: "Director, although I have only been in the Provincial Commission for Discipline Inspection for more than half a year, I have written materials for school leaders before. After coming to the Provincial Commission for Discipline Inspection, I have also read the masterpieces of my predecessors in the unit. I think I have a little superficial understanding of official document writing."
"In my opinion, Lu An can't write official documents at all. His writing is completely nonsense. Official documents require plainness and solidity, but some of his sentences are not smooth at all. I don't know why Director Zhao chose to let him continue. Isn't this embarrassing for our Third Supervision Office?"
If Lu An were here, he would have to give Yang Jinbao a thumbs up. If nothing else, the fact that he could bring up Zhao Yuedong's requirements on official document writing just now showed that he had some understanding. He was worthy of being a favored child who could fight his way through thousands of people and be admitted to Huaqing University.
But unfortunately, this young man who had just left the Novice Village ran into Lu An, who was at the maximum level, and was destined to be on tiptoe.
Qin Hailong nodded thoughtfully. On the one hand, he comforted Yang Jinbao not to lose heart, and on the other hand, he asked Yang Jinbao to keep the manuscript and told him: "Well, I will find someone to help you revise it and publish a new manuscript. Let's try to keep the right to sign the manuscript in our hands."
Yang Jinbao became excited. He handed the manuscript over with both hands, then bowed deeply to Qin Hailong: "Thank you, Director Qin. Everything is in your hands!"
However, Yang Jinbao was obviously too excited too early, because as soon as Yang Jinbao turned around and left the office, Qin Hailong threw the manuscript he had handed in respectfully directly into the trash can.
Qin Hailong obviously didn't believe what Yang Jinbao said. He was also a writer by profession and he knew very well the difficulty of writing official documents for government agencies. Therefore, he didn't believe how well Lu An could write, nor did he believe how well Yang Jinbao could write. Qin Hailong had his own plans.
Qin Hailong then picked up the phone and dialed a number: "Lao Liao, old classmate, I have something to trouble you for. Please help me write a high-quality report. I have no choice. This time I am reporting to the leader, and I don’t trust anyone else! I will treat you to a meal later."
From the very beginning, Qin Hailong never counted on Yang Jinbao. He needed Yang Jinbao only for an excuse to break the situation from him.
The one he really relied on was his old classmate who worked in the General Office and wrote articles for the leaders. He was a well-known writer in the Provincial Commission for Discipline Inspection. As long as he took action, wouldn't a little Lu An be easily captured?
In his opinion, unless Zhao Yuedong takes action personally, none of the people in the Third Supervisory Office are good enough.
As for the final variable, Zhao Yuedong, I can assign him more work so that he has no time to help.
When Qin Hailong thought of this, a smug smile appeared on his face.
Although he failed to take down Ge Shengli, he was still able to save his position in front of the secretary by submitting a report to the leader.
……
For several days, Lu An struggled with the draft report for his leader.
After three revisions, Lu An's manuscript finally passed Zhao Yuedong's review.
It has to be said that the province is still more strict, because in the second revision, Lu An had basically demonstrated his ability, but there was still a third revision. Lu An even felt that if he had not performed beyond his level the last time, there might have been a fourth revision.
This was normal. After all, he had been working in the county in his previous life. Although he had twenty years of experience in writing materials, his level was too low. Even as the county party secretary, he did not have such high requirements for the materials. In most cases, it was enough as long as they were acceptable.
But now that he has arrived at the Provincial Commission for Discipline Inspection, the situation is completely different. This is the province, and Zhao Yuedong is also an office director who came from a world of paperwork and meetings. It is said that he was once a high-level writer, so it is normal to have higher requirements.
Zhao Yuedong also said frankly: "In fact, your last manuscript has already fully met the standards, but it is a rare opportunity to report to the secretary in person. I hope you can perform better."
Lu An nodded seriously to show that he understood: "I am very grateful to Director Zhao for your criticism and correction. Under Director Zhao's guidance during this period of time, I can feel that my official document writing skills have improved significantly. This has benefited me a lot and is a precious asset for my whole life!"
Lu An was not flattering. Having lived two lives, Lu An knew very well that in a government agency full of intrigues, it was quite rare to have a sincere master to lead the way.
Moreover, Zhao Yuedong was not nitpicking. Not only were the problems he pointed out real, but there were some places that I did not find any problems with after repeated checks. Only after Zhao Yuedong pointed them out did I suddenly realize that they were indeed the case.
It is no exaggeration to say that if I could learn writing from Zhao Yuedong for a period of time and then go back to Pingjiang County, there would be absolutely no one in the entire county party committee and county government, from top to bottom, who could beat me!
After Lu An left, Zhao Yuedong picked up Lu An's report and looked at it from left to right, his face full of admiration.
He is talented and insightful, and most importantly, he is humble and willing to study hard step by step. With time, he will surely become a great man!
Suddenly, the phone on the desk rang. It was Qin Hailong calling. Zhao Yuedong thought about it, picked up Lu An's report and went to Qin Hailong's office.
Zhao Yuedong took out Lu An's manuscript and handed it to Qin Hailong's desk: "Director Qin, I want to report to you that Lu An's report has been written and passed the review. Please criticize and correct it."
However, Qin Hailong didn't even look at it, but took out another document.
"This is the report that Director Liao from the General Office wrote for Yang Jinbao. Please take a look, Director Zhao." Qin Hailong said directly.
Zhao Yuedong took a breath of cold air at that moment.
Qin Hailong really spent a lot of money to fight for the right to interpret this report!
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